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Sound is my foreground. by ~skittlcloud:iconskittlcloud:

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This is how we see it:
The music shakes the walls
This is how it goes.

It's like meeting yourself, awake
And merciless, swept up in
Clear
Blue
Daybreak,
Thick
Dark
Heartbreak

This is how we feel it:
Your heart beats in your stomach
This is how it goes.

Like an animal
Breathing and stretching towards horizons
You’ll never see
It's pulling and you should be
On
Your knees
To pray

This is how we cry out:
Inspiration
Everywhere
Information
Overload
This is how it goes.
©2008-2009 ~skittlcloud
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This wouldn't exist if it hadn't been for lame TV shows my parents watch.
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~lambs2ndseal:iconlambs2ndseal: Jun 19, 2008, 12:19:00 AM
Explanation on your explanation?? lol

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"Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast"
--Lewis Carroll

"A little nonsense now and then, is cherished by the wisest men"
--Roald Dahl

"ur funny i can here ur fatness threw the computer"
~EdwardLovesJacob
~skittlcloud:iconskittlcloud: Jun 19, 2008, 12:25:36 AM
:)

I enjoy hanging around people and just listening. I'll just sit in my living room and let people's voices swarm around me, and it's really entertaining how much I feel like writing when I do. Tonight I was in my living room where my parents were watching some soap opera-y show.
I'm not sure if that explains better or not. xD (With me, you just gotta roll with my explanations. Or ask. Which you did)

What's your opinion on this piece, dear?
~lambs2ndseal:iconlambs2ndseal: Jun 19, 2008, 1:26:13 AM
I think it has enough candor to be a R&B hit

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"Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast"
--Lewis Carroll

"A little nonsense now and then, is cherished by the wisest men"
--Roald Dahl

"ur funny i can here ur fatness threw the computer"
~EdwardLovesJacob
~skittlcloud:iconskittlcloud: Jun 19, 2008, 10:39:12 AM
Well, that's a new one.
Thank you, I think? xD
=sandmanno3:iconsandmanno3: Jun 27, 2008, 10:44:59 AM
amazing... I truly loved every line of this...
Powerful...

So wait, what about lame TV shows? lol

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Due to Economic Crisis, The Light at the End of the Tunnel has. Been. Turned. (Off.)
~skittlcloud:iconskittlcloud: Jun 27, 2008, 10:48:12 AM
Thank you so much. ^^

Hearing random words inspiiire me. Or something. And my parents were talking while watching lame TV shows.
=sandmanno3:iconsandmanno3: Jun 27, 2008, 10:50:06 AM
This poem inspires me XD

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Due to Economic Crisis, The Light at the End of the Tunnel has. Been. Turned. (Off.)
~skittlcloud:iconskittlcloud: Jun 27, 2008, 11:03:35 PM
^^ That makes me happy.
~DreamOfBeauty:iconDreamOfBeauty: Jul 4, 2008, 8:38:04 PM
Mm, I like this a lot.
It sounds pretty.
It feels intense.
<3
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